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Cover Letter Autopsy

A cover letter can't get you accepted. It can get you read with a frown. Editors want three things: your name, the word count, and a short bio. Everything else is a chance to hurt yourself. Paste yours below.

Your letter

75 words · 6 sentences

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Length75 words

Short enough to be read in full.

Addressed by nameno

Look up the fiction or poetry editor on the masthead. 'Dear Editor' reads as a mass mailing.

Word count statedno

State it plainly: 'my story, “Title” (3,400 words)'.

Plot summaryfound

The story should speak for itself. Most magazine guidelines ask you not to summarize.

Apologiesfound

No publications? Say nothing. Absence is neutral; apology isn't.

Hedges5

“just”, “i think”, “i believe”, “i feel”, “humbly”

Self-praise5

“amazing”, “masterpiece”, “perfect fit”, “page-turner”, “readers will love”

Sentences starting with “I”50%

A column of I's down the margin. Lead with the work.